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How to write a conversation with a sick character who is coughing [on hold]
What would you call a person who doesn't know what they like or will do with their life?
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I'm writing a story and the mom of my character chronically sick. I don't really know how to write realistic and good conversations with her. I feel that using cough cough would sound kind of cheap. Could you please provide me good examples of conversations with chronically ill characters that cough.
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I'm writing a story and the mom of my character chronically sick. I don't really know how to write realistic and good conversations with her. I feel that using cough cough would sound kind of cheap. Could you please provide me good examples of conversations with chronically ill characters that cough.
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I suggest you use the narrator's voice to describe how the mother's coughing made it difficult for her to talk. I agree that writing in the actual coughing would lean to the comical.
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I suggest you use the narrator's voice to describe how the mother's coughing made it difficult for her to talk. I agree that writing in the actual coughing would lean to the comical.
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I suggest you use the narrator's voice to describe how the mother's coughing made it difficult for her to talk. I agree that writing in the actual coughing would lean to the comical.
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I suggest you use the narrator's voice to describe how the mother's coughing made it difficult for her to talk. I agree that writing in the actual coughing would lean to the comical.
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I suggest you use the narrator's voice to describe how the mother's coughing made it difficult for her to talk. I agree that writing in the actual coughing would lean to the comical.
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I thought as much. Could you please give me some examples I could draw inspiration from?
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I thought as much. Could you please give me some examples I could draw inspiration from?
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I thought as much. Could you please give me some examples I could draw inspiration from?
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I thought as much. Could you please give me some examples I could draw inspiration from?
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