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1.Evidence on something is scant in global and almost non-existent in national scale.



2.Evidence on something is scant in global, and almost non-existent in national, scale.










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  • (a) Both would be correct were 'in global / national scale' acceptable. Use whichever aids parsing / reflects smooth speech patterns better (you might have to choose). (b) I'd use non-existent.

    – Edwin Ashworth
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  • What does 'sth' mean? I can't find it in the dictionary.

    – AmE speaker
    Oct 31 '17 at 12:46












  • @Clare "sth" is short for "something."

    – Vahid FV
    Oct 31 '17 at 13:41











  • Thank you @EdwinAshworth I actually wanted to combine "scant in global scale and almost non-existent in national scale" so to make an elliptical phrase with "scale" as the base. And sorry if my descriptions of technical grammatical terms suck!

    – Vahid FV
    Oct 31 '17 at 13:42







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    Simpler is better: Scant evidence exists nationally or internationally for [etc.]. Not sure scale is right here.

    – Lambie
    Jun 30 '18 at 15:19

















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I know the question itself is awkward!
I was going to write something like the sentences below, but I was not sure about the punctuation.



1.Evidence on something is scant in global and almost non-existent in national scale.



2.Evidence on something is scant in global, and almost non-existent in national, scale.










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  • (a) Both would be correct were 'in global / national scale' acceptable. Use whichever aids parsing / reflects smooth speech patterns better (you might have to choose). (b) I'd use non-existent.

    – Edwin Ashworth
    Oct 31 '17 at 10:28











  • What does 'sth' mean? I can't find it in the dictionary.

    – AmE speaker
    Oct 31 '17 at 12:46












  • @Clare "sth" is short for "something."

    – Vahid FV
    Oct 31 '17 at 13:41











  • Thank you @EdwinAshworth I actually wanted to combine "scant in global scale and almost non-existent in national scale" so to make an elliptical phrase with "scale" as the base. And sorry if my descriptions of technical grammatical terms suck!

    – Vahid FV
    Oct 31 '17 at 13:42







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    Simpler is better: Scant evidence exists nationally or internationally for [etc.]. Not sure scale is right here.

    – Lambie
    Jun 30 '18 at 15:19













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I know the question itself is awkward!
I was going to write something like the sentences below, but I was not sure about the punctuation.



1.Evidence on something is scant in global and almost non-existent in national scale.



2.Evidence on something is scant in global, and almost non-existent in national, scale.










share|improve this question
















I know the question itself is awkward!
I was going to write something like the sentences below, but I was not sure about the punctuation.



1.Evidence on something is scant in global and almost non-existent in national scale.



2.Evidence on something is scant in global, and almost non-existent in national, scale.







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  • (a) Both would be correct were 'in global / national scale' acceptable. Use whichever aids parsing / reflects smooth speech patterns better (you might have to choose). (b) I'd use non-existent.

    – Edwin Ashworth
    Oct 31 '17 at 10:28











  • What does 'sth' mean? I can't find it in the dictionary.

    – AmE speaker
    Oct 31 '17 at 12:46












  • @Clare "sth" is short for "something."

    – Vahid FV
    Oct 31 '17 at 13:41











  • Thank you @EdwinAshworth I actually wanted to combine "scant in global scale and almost non-existent in national scale" so to make an elliptical phrase with "scale" as the base. And sorry if my descriptions of technical grammatical terms suck!

    – Vahid FV
    Oct 31 '17 at 13:42







  • 1





    Simpler is better: Scant evidence exists nationally or internationally for [etc.]. Not sure scale is right here.

    – Lambie
    Jun 30 '18 at 15:19

















  • (a) Both would be correct were 'in global / national scale' acceptable. Use whichever aids parsing / reflects smooth speech patterns better (you might have to choose). (b) I'd use non-existent.

    – Edwin Ashworth
    Oct 31 '17 at 10:28











  • What does 'sth' mean? I can't find it in the dictionary.

    – AmE speaker
    Oct 31 '17 at 12:46












  • @Clare "sth" is short for "something."

    – Vahid FV
    Oct 31 '17 at 13:41











  • Thank you @EdwinAshworth I actually wanted to combine "scant in global scale and almost non-existent in national scale" so to make an elliptical phrase with "scale" as the base. And sorry if my descriptions of technical grammatical terms suck!

    – Vahid FV
    Oct 31 '17 at 13:42







  • 1





    Simpler is better: Scant evidence exists nationally or internationally for [etc.]. Not sure scale is right here.

    – Lambie
    Jun 30 '18 at 15:19
















(a) Both would be correct were 'in global / national scale' acceptable. Use whichever aids parsing / reflects smooth speech patterns better (you might have to choose). (b) I'd use non-existent.

– Edwin Ashworth
Oct 31 '17 at 10:28





(a) Both would be correct were 'in global / national scale' acceptable. Use whichever aids parsing / reflects smooth speech patterns better (you might have to choose). (b) I'd use non-existent.

– Edwin Ashworth
Oct 31 '17 at 10:28













What does 'sth' mean? I can't find it in the dictionary.

– AmE speaker
Oct 31 '17 at 12:46






What does 'sth' mean? I can't find it in the dictionary.

– AmE speaker
Oct 31 '17 at 12:46














@Clare "sth" is short for "something."

– Vahid FV
Oct 31 '17 at 13:41





@Clare "sth" is short for "something."

– Vahid FV
Oct 31 '17 at 13:41













Thank you @EdwinAshworth I actually wanted to combine "scant in global scale and almost non-existent in national scale" so to make an elliptical phrase with "scale" as the base. And sorry if my descriptions of technical grammatical terms suck!

– Vahid FV
Oct 31 '17 at 13:42






Thank you @EdwinAshworth I actually wanted to combine "scant in global scale and almost non-existent in national scale" so to make an elliptical phrase with "scale" as the base. And sorry if my descriptions of technical grammatical terms suck!

– Vahid FV
Oct 31 '17 at 13:42





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Simpler is better: Scant evidence exists nationally or internationally for [etc.]. Not sure scale is right here.

– Lambie
Jun 30 '18 at 15:19





Simpler is better: Scant evidence exists nationally or internationally for [etc.]. Not sure scale is right here.

– Lambie
Jun 30 '18 at 15:19










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Unless, on something' is there to indicate that you would be including details there, it doesn't add anything and could be omitted, and the order seems to be the wrong way round. I should give the information about the lack of evidence from the smaller area to the larger, for comparison, e.g. 'Evidence is almost non-existent in national scale, and scant (even)in a global scale'.






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    in a national scale is not idiomatic.

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Unless, on something' is there to indicate that you would be including details there, it doesn't add anything and could be omitted, and the order seems to be the wrong way round. I should give the information about the lack of evidence from the smaller area to the larger, for comparison, e.g. 'Evidence is almost non-existent in national scale, and scant (even)in a global scale'.






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Unless, on something' is there to indicate that you would be including details there, it doesn't add anything and could be omitted, and the order seems to be the wrong way round. I should give the information about the lack of evidence from the smaller area to the larger, for comparison, e.g. 'Evidence is almost non-existent in national scale, and scant (even)in a global scale'.






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Unless, on something' is there to indicate that you would be including details there, it doesn't add anything and could be omitted, and the order seems to be the wrong way round. I should give the information about the lack of evidence from the smaller area to the larger, for comparison, e.g. 'Evidence is almost non-existent in national scale, and scant (even)in a global scale'.






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Unless, on something' is there to indicate that you would be including details there, it doesn't add anything and could be omitted, and the order seems to be the wrong way round. I should give the information about the lack of evidence from the smaller area to the larger, for comparison, e.g. 'Evidence is almost non-existent in national scale, and scant (even)in a global scale'.







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